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ये ब्लोग कोलाज है शब्दो का क्योकि मै वह नहीं देख पाती जो सब देख पाते है.मेरी कविताओं मे अगर आप अपने को पाते है तो ये महज इतिफाक है । जिन्दगी की सचाईयाँ सबके लिये एक सी होती है सिर्फ नजरिया देखने का अलग अलग होता है ।
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7 comments:
Less words more meaning...
WOW!
short and sweet OR is it short and sad??
its a "classic" - meaning aap jo matlab nikalna chahein!!!!!! ;-))
i am putting this one as my desktop wallpaper!
really nice and hope aapke, aur jo bhi yeh comment pade, uske sab sapnay poore ho!!!!
ah, i just thought on this, may be i want my dreams to remain dreams because i like dreams! mujhe to sapnay hi aache lagte hain, poore ho gaye to kya reh jayega!
so may be ...... nothing to say!
"classics" should be read and enjoyed- thats all! ;-))
according to me if the dreams are realised then they are your dreams but if they are not realised then they just remain dreams . when i worte this i was in a fool hardy mood and according to me these four line had no depth but simple thought . yet people like amit and you have put a lot of depth into them. i think its the "reader " who make a "poem" a " poetry" the author just fontalize their own thougts. hats of to you and amit for finding so much depth into my little verse.
Amit And Anonymous
Let me know what comments are evoked on this poem
"woh cheekh cheekh kar khati hae mae aaj ki nari hoon"
thanks
ps
poets are always carving for comments !!!!
Anonymous
Amits poems are posted here may be u may find happiness there!!!!!
http://myheartsaystome-mypoems.blogspot.com/
when dreams are realised then they are no longer dreams, so unfullfilled dreams are better, they can truly be enjoyed and they are the best friends!!! - just a viewpoint - nothing to consider seriously though.
thanks for pointing me to amit's poems but really i am not looking for any happiness anywhere.. the whole game of looking for it is pointless!
सत्येंद्र प्रसाद श्रीवास्तव said...
बहुत खूब।
June 07, 2007
सत्येंद्र प्रसाद श्रीवास्तव said...
बहुत खूब. गहरी सोच
June 07, 2007
swapna said...
vaah, kyaa likhaa haai rachanaji
June 08, 2007
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